Jack of Harts

I put another story in the can today. It was a major rework of an existing story. I figured it would just take a minor tweak. It was more a major revision. I once again asked Grok to analyze once done and it did good. Some rabbit holes again. It really doesn’t like my style of emphasizing certain points or character thoughts. It also really doesn’t like me writing the character looking into people’s eyes to see if they are shocked or fearful or whatever. But it does good with other stuff. It is certainly a good tool to use to check for weaknesses in a story. I like it.